The Man Who Came Too Much
Well, as you probably expected, this was terrible. It was so gross, I can't even tell you. I'm not generally squeamish, although I'm not big with snot or things that a similar consistency, like mucous and semen, but I don't get grossed out by semen in a normal context. I can handle sex scenes where people swallow or come all over their partners, or lick it or whatever. This, where he collects it in jars and eventually his lover drinks it, make me want to hurl. The story was bad anyway but that, oh God, I have a date with the porcelain goddess right now.Update 3/4/12:
The author "liked" my negative review, which was cool in and of itself. Then I got to talking to her and she's great. So if you like a little bizarre with your erotica, check out something else of hers. I just can't recommend this because I'm too grossed out. :)