This was a great contribution to the LHNB event. It was entertaining and sometimes funny. I wasn't that fond of the doctor--he was too much of a control freak--but in the end he came around. "The kid" was a description I didn't like because the age difference wasn't *that* great, but it's common enough. There were a few POV changes mid scene and I have a few more nitpicks (since I tend to be that way) but overall a good story. Thank you to Shayla for contributing her story to this event!
Happy ending? Yep, HFN.